Saturday, 16 December 2017

Of Benzes and puddles: A short story

Part 1: The shortcut

'Who send me work?'

Having closed much later than usual from work today, I was confronted by standstill traffic a few miles from the office. As I came to a halt behind the stationary vehicles, I was just adjacent an alleged shortcut route that I had never attempted before in the day time, much less when there had a been a rainstorm earlier in the day, with the attendant likelihood of leaving puddles of water. A strong mental debate ensued. I had only a few moments to decide my course of action, before the opportunity would be lost, and I would have to deal with the uncertainty of how long the traffic jam would last.

With impatient drivers honking behind me and growing agitation to get home as quickly as possible, I made a choice. I turned off the main road into the intersecting street. Several other drivers quickly followed my lead.

In the glare of my headlights​, a small sedan was navigating what appeared to be a series of mounds of earth along the route. The apparent ease with which it did this encouraged me. So I eased my '99 Mercedes w202 onward.



A sign?
As I approached the first mound, the small sedan was getting out of sight around a bend in the road. I carefully adjusted my speed to ensure that the stylish bumpers of my c230 Kompressor would not strike the ground.

As I reached the summit of the bump, I could also see that there was also some water in the puddle thus formed. It was of little consequence, I mused. At the summit of the bump, I adjusted my approach to descend gradually into the water.

For a brief moment, the car did not move. Then I felt the left rear wheel losing traction. I applied some more throttle and the car eased forward.

I wondered how such a seemingly lowly obstacle could dare to inhibit me. My agitation though, peaked slightly and I felt some discomfort with my decision. A voice urged me to turn and go back.  My Kompressor felt ready though. So I advanced...